Compound Sentences with Personification

We have spent more time practicing how to build sentences to be more effective writers. This time were learned how to join two independent clauses (sentences) together with a comma and a conjunction to create a compound sentence, We also learned how to add personification (giving human qualities to nonhuman entities) to our sentences. We started with two different simple sentences:
and things just grew from there!

The rain fell.
The lights twinkled.

The smiling sun’s rays glistened like a disco ball through an oak tree, and the exhausted children sipped their lemonade like pumps taking out water from a pool. by Cameron

The dancing disco lights glistened like a gleaming lake on a bright sunny day, and the jumpy teenaged party people danced like never before on the dance floor.    by Brianna

The winking strobe lights glistened like firecrackers blowing up in the night sky, and the wannabe camp ranger sprinted back to his house like a cheetah running from a newborn grizzly bear.  by Andrew

The fireworks jumped in the night sky like monkeys fighting over a banana in a forest, and the sunlight winked on a very hot day.  by Alison

The jumping disco lights flickered over the dance floor, and the energetic teenagers danced like hot potatoes were under their feet.  by Heather B.

 The colored paper lanterns glittered in the black sky with light, but a special lantern greeted the water like a delicate flower.   by Kayla

The bright Northern Lights danced across the sky like a jumping toddler, and the snow covered Eskimos gawked like a woman seeing a chicken cross the street.  by Cady

The blinking stars sparkled like faraway headlamps in a dark forest, and the energetic runners jogged to the finish line like wasps flying back to their nest. by Adam

The dancing stars sparkled like tiny glow worms in the woods, and the sleepy campers slept like hibernating bears in a cave.  by Ben

The distant lanterns winked like a lighthouse in a storm, and the snowshoe racers sprinted back to their campsites.  by Codey

The twinkling Aurora Borealis jumped like a kangaroo springing into a bush, and the excited Eskimos smiled like gassy elephants in the zoo.  by Zak

The dancing campfire sparked like fireworks on a starless night, and the weary campers prepared their dinner on the dancing campfire like  grizzly bears foraging for food before hibernation.  by Austin

The dancing northern lights glowed like the hot sun on a sunny day, and the delighted woman was anxious to see them like a little girl at a birthday party looking at her presents.  by Heather M.

The blinking headlights beamed down like a bright and steaming stage light, but the scared hobos jumped like elephants scared of a little mouse at a spark of lightning.  by Tori

The sapphire rain swan-dived onto the ground like an Olympic swimmer, and the once clear rain drops sunk like an animal in quicksand. by Nick

The never ending marching downpour swept the ground, and the oversized farm animals jumped as high as a rabbit playing with a ball.  by Molly

The singing churches of rain hugged the pavement, and the young children danced around in the rain as joyfully as a monkey eating a banana. by Aaron

The wiping raindrops belly-flopped into the river like teenagers on a summer day, and the enormous river exploded onto the street like fireworks. by Amanda

The yelling raindrops exploded like grenades on the pavement, and the raindrops were so heavy and loud that it awakened all of the kids on the block. by Richie