We started with "The sun rose." and developed these complex sentences. Can you find at least one metaphor in each sentence?
When the blistering morning sun lifted its arms and stretched above the beautiful sky, the sound asleep children stampeded like bulls to get to the bus stop. by Molly
Though the beautiful golden sun drifted into the dull sky, the lazy sloths did not wake up. by Aaron
As the dull morning sun started sprouting over the mountain, the excited, sleepy kids turned into cheetahs and sped downstairs on Christmas morning. by Adam
As the scorching evening sun levitated its big body above the sky, the sleepy children began sleep walking and became zombies. by Andrew
As the scorching morning sun lifted into the sky, the moaning snoring children became zombies getting ready for school. by Austin
When the fiery morning sun arose its smiling face out of the towel sky, the sleepy campers started to get up out of bed. by Zak
As the awakening sun emerged through the sheet of clouds, the drowsy and tired friends started rolling around because they thought that they were balls tumbling down a hill. by Cameron
While the beating yellow sun grew to be a balloon over the blue sky, the small happy village became yawning bears in the morning. by Codey
While the glimmering sun grew to be a sun flower over the horizon, the cranky children sobbed like little babies for candy. by Heather M.
When the feisty sun rose up into a giant dandelion in the sky, the whole sleepy village woke to the big yellow flower in the ocean of atmosphere. by Kayla
Tuesday, May 10, 2011
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