Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Building Sentences: The cat ran.


We have been working on building sentences starting with a simple sentence and adding specific words, similes, and phrases. Last week we started work on combining predicates and adding prepositional phrases. Here are a few examples of what the class came up with. We all started with the simple sentence, "The cat ran."

The fresh newborn kitten darted toward the delicious cat food, scurried around the beautiful room, and jogged out of the house into the tall grass like a nervous monkey in a pool. by Aaron

The cuddly shadowy black kitten dashed across the newly bought carpet, skidded over the polished wood floor, and pounced on a mouse like a deranged maniac. by Ben

Like a ballistic Chihuahua, the spazoid double pawed, tortoise shell cat skidded from the mall, dashed down the road, and darted to its master. by Campbell

The fluffy Persian cat chased a mouse through the tall green grass, clambered onto a giant rock, and pounced onto the mouse like a cop tackling a criminal. by Zak

The rugged panther darted between two bushes, scurried through the long-grassed green field, and chased a bunny rabbit into a small cave like a soccer ball into a net during a soccer game. by Adam

The scrawny cheetah chased behind the baby buffalo, skidded into a mini rock, and pounced on a mouse like Mr. Hansen at dessert. by Amanda

The adorable cub stalked across the towering grass, tip-toed toward the tiny deer, and pounced on the surprised antelope like a cop catching a criminal. by Cady

The calico cat darted over the squirrel, scurried through the lunch room, and skidded across the floor like a fifth grader on water skis. by Austin

Like a dog chasing an insane cat, the ballistic cat sprinted through the red door, dashed onto the sidewalk, and darted upon the fence. by Brianna

Like a track and field runner, the energetic Persian cat zipped across the kitchen, dashed through the backdoor, and sprinted into the lush grass. by Cameron

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