Friday, February 11, 2011

Sentence Building: The Car Crashed

The class played around with building sentences again. We started with "The car crashed" and added specific words, multiple predicates, prepositional phrases, and a simile (which could be moved to the beginning of the sentence for a bit of variety if so desired).



The smooth silver Lamborgini Diablo screeched across the gray rough pavment, drifted out-of-control, and slammed into the dented guardrail like a bizzare chimpanzee slapping a fat elephant on the cheek. by Aaron



Mr. Hansen’s rugged black Dodge truck drifted across the busy highway, fish-tailed over a small patch of dirty grass, and hydroplaned over a large lake like a bird flying over the treetops.   by Adam ( I wish I had a flying truck!)





The antiquated blue automobile fish-tailed across the road, shattered on the slippery ice, and self-destructed like a rocket shooting into the sun. by Brianna
The gassy pearl pink automobile whooshed through the dusty dirt, collapsed onto the flaming fire, and disintegrated onto the boulder like paper crashing through fire. by Cady

Like Godzilla destroying the city, the neon purple Ferrari bent when it hit the guardrail that was stiff, collapsed on an angry little old lady, and demolished a hospital speeding through traffic. by Alison

The brand-new silver minivan skid on the deadly black ice, smashed into the bus stop, and exploded upon the very unhappy store clerk’s store like an out of control gorilla. by Amanda


Like a stage 5 hurricane, the speeding onyx black  Aston-Martin hydroplaned into the rusty guardrail, somersaulted through the windless air, and shattered every shining window in the car.  by Cameron


Like an out- of- control fire- cracker, the stylish lime green Chevy Cruz drifted over the baseball field, flew above the charcoal black road, and exploded between the ten story buildings. by Ben


Like a monster truck crushing a car, the mint condition cherry red Dodge Viper drifted around the tight corner, slammed into the huge wall, and destroyed the yellow Camaro.  by Codey


The white flat tired SUV slammed into the old rusty guardrail, smashed through the brick wall, and rolled down the bumpy hill like an elephant stomping on the ground. by Molly


The rusted dinged-up black Camero spun out behind the schools playground, skidded across the icy road, and swerved into the chalky white ice-coated snow like a first grader grabbing ice cream. by Austin
 


The dirty old pickup skidded across the ice-riddled highway, tumbled into the opposite lane, and ruptured an oil truck like a speeding bullet piercing through metal. by Dallas

The insane sapphire automobile drifted across the smooth black ice, fish-tailed around the sharp slick corner and slammed into the frosty metal guardrail like a wrinkly elephant heading for his mud bath. by Heather B.

The unkempt burnt-sienna Buggy skidded across the stormy rain-drenched road, severed the murky cars windows, and pulverized most everything else like a rogue criminal. by Kayla

The brand-new rocket powered Ferrari swerved into the dusty sand, hydroplaned over the Pacific Ocean, and exploded on the dwarf like a bomb. by Nick

The out of control onyx Mustang smashed into a stained guard rail, wrecked into a secure brick wall at New Searles School, and disintegrated in Mr.Hansens class like TNT. by Richie

Like an elephant scared of a weak little mouse, the trendy fiery jeep burst around the spooky tunnel, sped across the curved corner and collapsed off of the guard rail. by Tori


The crazy maroon Cheetah race car crashed into a burning building, bounced off a rock, hit a guardrail, and disintegrated like a meteor crashing into the sun. by Andrew



The sanitary Green Lamborghini Gallardo drifted from the furious intersection, tumbled across the contaminated street, and demolished an indigo house like a furious hyena. by Zak
Sorry car lovers for destroying all those fine cars!





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